Are Your Ads Broken Too?
Internet marketing can be a glorious business, can’t it? I realize
most are in the "start-up" phase and I also know how head
spinning that can be.
Whether you are a new or well on your way, I see a sticking point
with most…. writing the copy, headlines and offer.
Being how I hang in the underbelly of Warrior (the copywriting forum)
I see many, MANY questions about headlines and such from people
not real interested in learning copywriting.
For those of you unable or unwilling to hire an experienced copywriter,
here is something that may help-
The Mall Walk
The ‘mall walk’ for me is trying to see your product/offer as most will
see it. When you are creating your product page and squeeze pages
what do you see? Just your product, right?
You are oblivious to the fact that your offer is in a sea of millions of
offers. Because you only see what is on your screen you are thinking
that’s what everyone sees…. most see "what the hell is this?"
Not the easiest position to sell from
When you are in a shopping mall you will notice heavy competition
between the stores. They know you have only so much money to
shop with and they want it.
What gets you interested in going into the store normally?
A. Display sign with a sale or other announcement
B. A store that has stuff you know you like
Both are VITAL to get the people that will spend some dough. You
don’t care about those who just walk through. (like getting 10,000
visitors to your page and making two sales) You want the ones
most likely to buy.
If I saw a sign on a store that said 75% off and it was on fishing gear,
I would not notice or care. If I seen a sign at The Guitar Center that
said "New Gibson Les Paul – No Payments for One Year"
I AM SCREAMING IN THERE!!!!
Notice how I did not need a ‘cheap price’ to be totally captivated by
the message. I would walk past the store normally even though I
love playing guitar. I have a guitar, but not a Les Paul.
They not only got me to come in, they have just sold me a Les Paul
for retail. I can’t pass it up as now I already envisioned having
one. They dug into my skull to find a burning desire I was not thinking
about at all. I was not getting ready to buy a Les Paul, not even close.
Your ebook, software, membership site, affiliate up-sells or whatever
needs to find the right people THEN say the right thing.
Most think copywriting is a mystical art…. think of it more as a metal
detector. If you look for coins in the desert, not so good. If you go
to a busy beach…
Find out who benefits most from your offer. If you know who they
are and what arouses them, you’re almost there. You don’t even
need a long sales letter if you have the audience, attention grabber
and offer screwed down tight.
When writing your headline don’t try to be generic or hyped. Just tell
them about their "Les Paul" and then give them no way to refuse.
The Guitar Center may not sell 500 $3000 guitars that day, but they
will have sold many they never would have otherwise.
Anyway, I hope that helps you see what you’re selling a little more
clearly.
go get some
Paul