8 Mistakes You Should Avoid In Your Ad Writing

8 BIG Mistakes You Don’t Want To Make In Marketing
There are always things you should do in marketing, and thing you shouldn’t do in marketing that are usually pretty obvious. However, there are also things you should and shouldn’t do in marketing that aren’t always so obvious, and can derail you in record time if you aren’t aware of them.
Riddling your sales materials with hype- Sorry that may have worked once upon a time, but now we’re in 2010 and people have wised up. Too much hype will shut down your prospect faster than you can spit and it would take a crow bar and heavy lifting to open them back up again.
Riddling your copy with a bunch of ‘about me’ statements- Simply put, people don’t care about you. They want to know what you can do for them, not the other way around. They don’t care about your life history, or how your product is the greatest ever invented… they want to know how it can save the day for THEM. Yes there is a time and place to talk features in your material and yes there is a time and place to share stories or background about you to create rapport. Just don’t go overboard and make the entire sales letter centered around you instead of the needs of your prospects.
Assuming makes an ass out of both U and Me- Ever heard that saying? Don’t ever make a ton of assumptions about your prospect. It’s a sure fire way to lose them because they feel like you don’t really know them or can’t really relate to them.
Being longwinded and wordy- People have short attention spans. Telling them in 200 words what you could have easily accomplished in 100 ticks people off, triggers their impatience, and means they STOP reading what you have to say before they even get to anything good. That is BAD. So keep your copy concise, to the point, and relatable.
Subscribing to the herd mentality- Honestly it’s very attractive when first starting out to follow all of these great copywriters and learn what they know, do what they do, etc. And yes, I feel that if you model successful people you will achieve success in your life. But there comes a time when you also have to establish yourself as a unique individual, and you can’t do that by doing everything everyone else says to do.
For instance… I’ve been told repeatedly by Internet marketers that my websites are too dark. People like colors like white and blue, etc. But I’m not like the rest of the world, and my favorite colors happen to be dark colors. I like them because they are edgy. And I want my websites and business to reflect me, not just what is ‘accepted’. Does this hurt my business?
Perhaps it does. I am sure there are some people who land on my page and say ‘Oh, she’s so young, what can she possibly know’? Or ‘Oh, that’s too dark, I’m not sure I want to work with someone with a website like that’.
But I’m OK with that, because for every person that turns away because of those things, I get another that says they LOVE my site, LOVE my content, LOVE my work and like the dark and edgy feel it offers. It’s DIFFERENT. UNIQUE. Not what the rest of the population may be doing, and sometimes… that’s a good thing.
Seriously… Would YOU Buy From You?
Copywriters are in a very unique position to influence people and their thoughts and actions. The problem is a lot of them will totally derail themselves before they even get off the ground. Not to mention any clients they may be writing copy for.
I can’t tell you how many times I’ve happened to run across a really KILLER sales letter. It sucked me in and spit me back out and I was smiling the whole way, grateful for the chewing. Right up until about the time I got to the end, and realized that everything this guy was telling me was probably a big load of bullsh**.
Know why it was a load of bullsh**? Because the whole way through letters like these, this guy, or ‘person’ is telling me how much they can help me and how much I can trust them. And I’m in total agreement until I reached the end of the sales letter and realized that they didn’t even put their name on that letter. Nor did they put any kind of contact info on the letter. No phone number… no email. Nada.
So then I do a bit of stealth recon and realize that I can’t find contact info for these people ANY where on the entire site. No photos of them to reassure me. No helpline. Not even a lousy support email address.
Guess what happens at that point? Trust goes flying out the window and that sales letter is now scarlet lettered with the words SCAM across it.
So the moral of the story here, is when you’re selling somebody something in print, transparency really is key. Don’t screw up a killer sales letter by not giving your clients and prospects SOME way of getting in contact with you or your support staff.
Trust is the name of the game, and if your prospects can’t trust you and trust that they can get in contact with you after the sale for whatever the reason may be, then you just wasted a whole lot of energy writing a sales letter that will fall flat.
People want to buy cool stuff or great services… but they only want to buy from people they feel they can trust. Would YOU buy from you in such a situation? Probably not, and neither will anyone else. Brand yourself. Brand your work. Brand your business. Be accessible in some form or another.
I work from home, but I have contact forms all over my websites, and I am very accessible via Twitter and Facebook. I’m pretty transparent in everything I do, and because of that I am rewarded with some great clients and great fans of my work. People trust me to deliver on what I say I will deliver. How accessible and transparent are YOU to YOUR prospects?
So if you find yourself doing any of these things in your sales and
marketing, you may want to reverse course — pronto:
1. Too chatty (when selling in person, by phone, even in ads)
2. Lecturing (instead of telling stories — for more on sales
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described in the PS of the sales letter)
3. Assuming too many things about your prospect
4. Not doing enough research
5. Following the crowd (this’ll get ya every time!)
6. Slathering your pitch with hype
7. Screaming at customers (either audibly or in print)
8. Being too product centered (and not market centered)
So there you have it.
Eight freakishly easy ways to "unsell" your product.
Cori Padgett

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